Rydia

Well done, June! Such a sweet, touching story!

Love the description, dear. Congrats!

Awesome writing, Sam. Well done!

I think I also intend to make a completely new character but male or female... I haven't decided yet. I'd quite like to see what the balance is first.

There's really not much we can post at the moment...

Elias Sharks... what fascinating creatures. Elias grinned down at the water as he watched the silvery fins squirming through its turbulent depths. The sharks stayed low, deceiving on-lookers with thei

The scene sounds good. Elias would be on Dijon's side. He quite liked Eamon.

Congrats, Andy, it's very well deserved!

Haha, happy birthday, dear! *Snugs*

Just a quick note on your layout first. You should leave double lines between each paragraph and speech, like this, just because it looks a little neater and spaces your ...

So with NaNoWriMo over, I'm back to my critique list! I don't know if you're still wanting comments on this but hey, a critique never hurts. If nothing else, it ...

So with NaNoWriMo over, I'm back to my critique list! I don't know if you're still wanting comments on this but hey, a critique never hurts. If nothing else, it ...

Anzius, would you mind editing your post? Only, we posted at a similar time and I sort of moved Elias (who wasn't sleeping to repeat Dono's point) over to where ...

Nope, I'm not a flaunter. That suggests boasting and I'd really rather not because there simply isn't anything to boast about, I'd run out of traits to mention and then ...

I lost again? Gah! If only I were one of the lucky few not playing... I do love it when random strangers or class mates suddenly say 'I lost the ...