Rydia

Here's our character! Name: Lorcan (Irish in origin means Silent or Fierce.) Gender: Male Race: Human Age: 19 Appearance: He's tall and solidly built with curly, red hair and almond ...

I'm sure it won't be long before we bring it to a conclusion, I'm on msn pretty regular so if you just send a hey whenever you log on, I ...

The planet approached in the viewer and the group stared in wonder at its beauty. Tall, elegant towers scraped the sky, made of some unfamiliar, almost glassy material and the ...

I already started, woot!

I prefer using the caps lock too! And yes, it's strange how automatic that does become. I've not used shift before... it would be quite interesting to see which is ...

“For Christ’s sake, Mella, get up.” His voice was low, a grumble [s]the[/s] that hurt more than the shouting did. I could hear the voices from the lights, the people ...

“You want to chill out, Pet? You’re going to break your plates.” I think he almost threw the third plate at me, the way he held it in his hand ...

“hrm?” Nonchalance, as always, he’d have said, if everything had been normal. [Did you mean to use 'hrm' only it doesn't seem quite natural so I expect you meant hmm.] ...

I don't have enough suggestions for this chapter to do a line by line so I'll just quote sections: A woman in a red coat burst through the [s]cafe[/s] café ...

Elias Fixated on the remaining crumbs of defiled flesh, the gargoyle lay in wait of the sharks. They did not return. He stood patiently long after the deck had cleared ...

Ahoy my dear! Okay so I shall start with a line by line and work my way around to general points =) A man. They float by, pretty [Here's my ...

Part two is up and here's the link as requested. Thank you, Mat and no need to hurry.

It felt nice to be able to write a longer post but it generally wasn't mine, you know? It was more me adding Kestrel's view to one of your posts ...

I'm in agreement with Nutty there, it may be a month late due to NaNo but it gets done =) And I'll admit I often go with the line by ...

I'm around sort of. Just a little busy. Why don't you go ahead and make a post, Jaden? I'll follow on from there.