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Congrats, niteowl! That's awesome =) *cheers*

Kestrel It was hard to concentrate on the fight and watch the weirdos on pigs at the same time, so Kestrel settled for just the latter, trusting that Kai could ...

Uh... I'm with Jack on this one.

I'm completely failing this XD I doubt I'll catch up... I'll give it a shot but I've got a feeling my reputation is about to take a hit and there's ...

*Posted at same time so just ignore this one* Kestrel "And we'd like to keep it that way," Kestrel said as she dropped her offensive stance and turned back to ...

Hey Jack! A few particulars first: that hides its bones in the rooms where collisions used to happen, [I'm in agreement that this line is a little out. I'd suggest ...

Merry Christmas/ Happy Holidays everyone! I'm not up to me. There will be the opening of presents and the eating of Christmas Dinner but in general, it will be an ...

And for part two, good to see it's looking a little longer than the first =) Bluefire was crossing the camp when a voice hailed him. He recognized Firestar. [This ...

Hey there Stori, I be here to give you a review =) "Bluefire! Bluefire!" The warriors' chant send a surge of satisfaction through the cat once known as Spark. At ...

Well generally people receiving an advanced critique will give extra points out or reviews in exchange. But the base idea of this forum, is a review for a review. Those ...

Hey there! Looks like you've already had some good advice from Suzie but I'll see if I can't add my own as well. I know [s]your[/s] you're not kind [Also ...

Kestrel Feeling like a little girl again, she clung to her mother's hand, her eyes glued to that smiling face as they traced a path through the ranks of the ...

This is a really cute poem. Your rhythm is rather out in places though so I'll give some specific advice first and then a couple of general tips... I drew ...

This is a really cute gift and normally I'm not for the bubble-gum rhyming style of poetry but it's fitting here. I'll give you a quick line by line, show ...

Hey there! Posting old work isn't always the best of plans because it's difficult to advise someone who has probably advanced beyond the level of skill being exhibited but I'll ...