Rydia

Thank you for the prompt and many replies my dears =) On the question of could it be extended, I think yes it could. I'll have a look at how ...

We know Dynamo, there's no need to remind us. I'll post either tomorrow or Monday.

*Scroll down for the edited version.* Emotions teem and tangle, crossing wires with buried - treasure all unearthed in zealous pattern by - shallow hands know not what they hold ...

Hey hey! Okay so I love the end of this poem and everything that's held in that last line and you have some lovely imagery and a good theme but ...

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Scarce years before, I came this way, when infernos crunched the rubble rings and glass streets were rife with vermin delegates. Hence summoned by the whims of man, who bade ...

I've sent a quick pm to a few of the others who were writing with us. Let's see how many we can get back and if need be I'll make ...

Done =)

Sorry you've had to wait so long! First sentences To be honest, not everyone will judge your story by the first sentence, some might give it a page before they're ...

Excellent work, we've got some really good characters here =)

Maisy It was some hours later that they were at a location Maisy didn't recognise and everyone had re-grouped and somewhere along the way, Audri had been caught and shut ...

Sorry Dynamo, I'll have a go at posting but this just doesn't really feel like a storybook to me. The whole plot is already ordained and I've always thought the ...

Maud The hares were all about, sneaking along, their ears pricked up, all sneaking after one another as if this were some wild game. It unsettled Maud, sent a tingle ...

Thank you =)

Chris I was taking a whizz by a tree when the girl came running towards me. Her arms were flailing and she had a dagger in one of them. I ...