Rydia

I'm really loving some of your imagery in this one, particularly the last two lines of your first stanza, very well written. However, I'm not sure about your word choice ...

I'd like steal gold please. Adam The money wasn't flowing well and it was too cold for staying out too long so reluctantly Adam made his way back up the ...

Not far off the 10,000 mark now!

I think I shall start with a line by line lest you should get lost in my rambling comments =) I am I am I am I am if only ...

Hey there! To be honest, I don't like this one as much as some of your others, I found it a little dull and plain. There isn't anything that really ...

Sure thing Jared. Sorry about the short delay everyone, moving back to uni has set me a little behind but I'll get back on track soon.

Kestrel It was embarrassing to watch Kai fight with Ganju so Kestrel decided instead to politely direct her eyes to the floor and sighs of exasperation seemed to weave through ...

I'm considering a second character. She would be a mage or dark mage if I decide to add her ^^

Name: Adam Scotch Gender: Male Age: 22 Class: Thief Appearance: He's average height with a slim build. His hair is dark brown and curly, kept short while his eyes are ...

Here's a few general pieces of advice: Spell Check It may not sound like much but seriously, run your work through a spell checker before you post it. It gives ...

Hey there! Here you go, as requested, just a few comments on the story itself, I'll not be too nit-picky: “My life is over,” Cheryl wailed, tears streaming down her ...

I'd be happy to =) Got a few other pieces lined up but expect it within the next 24 hours. Keep them coming guys, I've got a new goal of ...

Any time my dear xx

Hello there! Okay I think I shall start with a line by line and then sum my feelings up at the end once I've decided what those are ;) To ...

Yeah, I've only had a quick look at the site so far but I'll check it out again later. And seriously Dynamo, three days isn't a long time to wait ...