Rydia

I'm going to write mostly in modern English to make this easier to read. Evangelina She didn't understand the list of names and places she'd been given but it wasn't ...

Any time. People can make their first post whenever they are ready. It should start with an ordinary day for their character and end with them being approached by Walt ...

Adam Watching with a measure of amusement, Adam pulled the stolen coins out from within the cuff of his shirt and tossed them one by one across to Baleas. The ...

Yes, that's good =)

Adam "Then climb down the ladder and get in here," Adam called back lazily. He moved across to a drinks cabinet that leaned against one wall of the room and ...

Tried a couple of works... Poem with male persona: male but only just. Romance story extract: highly female. Ghost Writer section one: highly female. Ghost Writer section two: female but ...

Talents approved Boltageman (But could you please be more specific? In what particular area is he most intelligent? Science, English, Learning itself?) Princess Light_Devil Firestalker piepiemann22 Fo

Imagery At the moment, your poem is supported only by simple images and as such it doesn't particularly stand out. It's difficult to write beautiful metaphors when you're working to ...

Why hello there, fancy seeing you here. Okay so I've not had a storybook of my own for a while now and it's really starting to depress me so I ...

You've had quite a lot of specific advice so you should be able to neaten up those details now but I'm going to try and give you a few suggestions ...

Two years old and still at 50/50 that's democracy for you ;)

Adam It was a harsh sounding laugh that escaped Adam's throat, harder and more grating than he had meant it to be. It was filled with a dull hatred for ...

Good to have you back SH =)

By the way, I've decided that Adam was five when his mother handed him over to his father. And instead of making a second character, I'm going to tie this ...

Hey hey! Others have caught the couple of typos you had so I'll not repeat those and instead try to give you some more general advice. Song Compatibility It worked ...