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Re: Twelve Moons 'Til Midnight
Hey, please can you be sure to rate your works in future? I've given this an R for language. Thanks. As for a review, it looks good but you should ...
Apr 8, 2009 -
Re: A Cristmas story (the gift)
He was going to buy a present for the woman he loved, [I'd suggest making this a colon.] Emily. I'm going to pause here, at the end of your second ...
Apr 8, 2009 -
Re: YWS Radio Ads
I've seen two and three, not sure aout one. If it was posted a while ago then yeah, that too. Sounds pretty sweet =)
Apr 8, 2009 -
Re: The Search for Snoink
Okay so this ship doesn't get flown too often (I'm too used to the YWS Highwind) but here's the concept art for it. Thanks Griff, I knew I'd need this ...
Apr 8, 2009 -
Re: VG Rumble II
Cathy Fire crackled in the palms of Cathy's hands as she hurled balls of it at the frost atronach. She had it backing up toward the town, away from where ...
Apr 6, 2009 -
Re: The Search for Snoink
Security had already been breached once and this was an emergency so Heather really didn't think she had any option as she passed herself and the entire group through security. ...
Apr 6, 2009 -
Re: Kitty's NaPoWriMo Thread 2009
Thank you =) Number four is my favourite so far! [Warning: this one is rated PG13 for language.] #4 A Gentleman's Plea Take ma 'ome instead sir, go on sir, ...
Apr 4, 2009 -
Re: Kitty's NaPoWriMo Thread 2009
#3 Don't be sad It was an angel Mommy, with a picket fence smile and just one gap (like when I was little Mommy). I could see her heart through ...
Apr 3, 2009 -
Re: Hi
Hye there, I'll uh... let the greeters do the whole information overload thing and just say that it's good to meet you and I hope you're settling in alright. Feel ...
Apr 3, 2009 -
Re: To Save the World
Sounds like a cool idea.
Apr 3, 2009 -
Re: Jas's Attempts at Poetic Form
Sueee! Yay, love love
Apr 3, 2009 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [6]
Pretty Teague! And uh... me gusta mucho tus ojos, si? Or something to that effect XD
Apr 3, 2009 -
Re: Kitty's NaPoWriMo Thread 2009
Okay so the collection of poems I write for my screnzy won't be titled and yes they are supposed to be badly written. Call it cheating but actually it's quite ...
Apr 2, 2009 -
Re: He Lusts For Imperfections Even Now: a sestina.
Hai! I can happily say that this is lovely and I am not at all disapointed. Your wit and character carry through into the form of poetry very well. I ...
Apr 2, 2009 -
Re: Blood, Water and Tears
Hullo =) I don't think I liked this one as much as the other I read by you but it has potential, particularly the last verse. You've made good use ...
Apr 2, 2009
