Rydia

Hello there! This is such a sweet poem! I've just got a few comments and suggestions for you: I watch the world around me, This is a very vague first ...

Hi there! This is a good start to poetry, writing down thoughts that occur to you while in class but the poem feels a little fragmented and doesn't quite flow ...

Hey Chevy, lovely seeing you ^^ This is a very interesting poem, I'm going to echo Nate and say I love the thought process and the simple feel to it. ...

Generally we play by choosing two of the members of YWS who we think would make a good match though naturally sometimes we choose those that wouldn't as well XD ...

Hullo! I enjoyed reading this one, I loved the references and the rhythm of it and found it to be a great change from most poetry I've read lately. Here's ...

Jaspar How strange, the male seemed to be hostile. He said he couldn't stay. Well that wasn't very nice of him but maybe he was having similar feelings for girls ...

Joe I rubbed my head as I sat up. That had been one hell of a fight and the worst fall down a flight of stairs yet. I wondered why ...

You could always reach the old max Omar XD I like the purple stars which is probably good because I think I'll be seeing them for some time, hehe.

That might not be a bad idea. There could be an attack on the settlement while Lia is leading Aridos around the woods. We could fodder for a few more ...

Okay thanks for clearing those things up! In that case Jaspar thinks he's emotionless and has been suppressing his emotions without realising it and he has telekinesis but it has ...

Voted. I'm also in favour of the badge system.

I'm going to make a second character so that Aisling isn't alone for too long ^^ Name: Jaspar Age: 21 Gender: Male Appearance: Jaspar has mildly tanned skin and a ...

1. This would be better if it was just the statue, or if the person was posed instead of just standing there. It might also have been nice to align ...

Idahlia Concentrating on the young man's looks helped Idahlia to quickly recover from her shock. He had short red hair and a sharp jaw and he was thin and lithe, ...

For all my experience of the world I did not recognise the strange creatures that poured through the gates. I had barely reached the king in time and now it ...