Rydia

Have Tyler head either in the direction of the trading post or the small settlement. Unfortunately my characters are rather tied up there and your description of a burned town ...

Hi Kyousuke, welcome to YWS! Honesty is a very good quality in a person and you seem very kind and friendly, it's a pleasure to meet you. I spend a ...

Hey there! You're clearly detined to be here if the site's cropped up more than once in your life XD yes, it is very different from two years ago, the ...

Hi there! There's no limit on how many words a novel can be in this section and the rule is that what you post has to be a complete novel ...

We're all here to share our writing and help each other improve so it doesn't matter what level you're currently at but I'm sure you're being modest anyway. Maybe we'll ...

Hey Maine, welcome to YWS! You'll find quite a large fan base for fantasy over here, I have to admit I read more fantasy books than any other and well, ...

I'm liking this one but I wonder where your plot is? It would be nice if you could mould these poems around more than just the painting. Describing what you ...

Hey Kamas! You've got some awesome images here but the lines feel jerky and disconnected in places, you might want to smooth that out. Also, I think some of the ...

*snugs teh Rosey* This poem reads a lot like prose so it should probably be in the Narrative poetry section. You should also look at shortening some of your lines, ...

Sorry, I've had a frantic few days but I can post now! Ben, that would be awesome, we could really use some more characters :) Jaspar "It will do just ...

The smaller the group of characters, the easier it is to read from beginning to end. Sometimes too many writers over complicates a storybook and the chaarcters end up breaking ...

You have a good start here, a strong theme which is the most important part and a rough skeleton that's just waiting to be filled with words. It does need ...

Hey there! Love the idea behind this poem, it has the potential to be morbidly amusing but you're not quite there yet. There's a few rough edges you might want ...

Beautiful. So long since I've read a poem that plays with the syntax of words so much! You earn the first gold star of the day but first a few ...

Whoooo! I haven't seen an acrostic poem in a while, I love these things! It's an excellent place to start when writing poetry but you should play around with rhythm ...