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Re: Hello everyone, another newbie :)
Fantasy and horror, that's me. Or rather fantasy and darkness. Not necessarily horror but the grimy reality of characters who've been through the mill. Favourite authors? Howdy! Salutations, I'm Heath
Feb 26, 2010 -
Re: hello
Hey there Tolkien! How strange that my nickname for you shall be the famous author himself XD Welcome, welcome. Fantasy's a good place to start, I take it that's your ...
Feb 26, 2010 -
Re: Hey Ya'll :) BMat's Here!
Well hello there, bmat, I'm one of those people who will be coming after you if you break the rules ;) Apart from that, welcome. I read one of your ...
Feb 26, 2010 -
Re: Shedding Boxes
This is cute. That was my ending perception of it, some nice, tidy lines than make an okay poem. Until that last line I was actually quite intrigued, I thought ...
Feb 26, 2010 -
Re: Promise?
I love formatted poetry! I think you should work it so that the expected ending fits though, it would be a shame to not finish the pantoum. Here's a few ...
Feb 26, 2010 -
Re: Alissa's Mark
Cyla I recognised the importance of attending the meeting but for the same reason that I left Aspen behind on the previous venture away from my clan, I knew I ...
Feb 23, 2010 -
Re: Alissa's Mark DT
Alright so the sky clan are just meeting I take it? Which means Cyla isn't needed yet?
Feb 22, 2010 -
Re: Advanced Critiques Questions
Post the whole thing. Most of the novels here are at least that length or longer to be honest, I've reviewed one or two that were longer. The more people ...
Feb 22, 2010 -
Re: Alissa's Mark
Cyla When the fox fell down I hissed and sprung away in fright. I didn't understand what had happened, I hadn't thought that I'd been contaminated by the disease. I ...
Feb 22, 2010 -
Re: Persephone's Abduction
Thanks Stella, I made a few quick edits. Possibly it needs extending but I'll look at that another time. I love the myth of Persephone too! I wrote a poem ...
Feb 21, 2010 -
Re: Persephone's Abduction
A modernization of the Persephone myth. Persephone's Abduction Wild flowers grew alongside the path that ran parallel to the cemetery and boys were often seen picking the blooms for their ...
Feb 21, 2010 -
Re: Aerolite
You should aim to fight the government with air and fire, they're stronger against earth and water as they have more of those elements ^^ On a similar note, the ...
Feb 20, 2010 -
Re: Aerolite
[/b]Ivy[/b] "If you walked faster it wouldn't take so long!" Ember snapped irritably. I decided it was best not to comment. Our leader could be short tempered like that, particularly ...
Feb 17, 2010 -
Re: Survive on an Island...or else.
Robert "Sunrise," I muttered as Lacy helped me lift the net out of the water and heave it on to dry land. The fishes thrashed, suffocating on the air. I ...
Feb 17, 2010 -
Re: What does it matter
Hi there! I'm back. I'll try to explain the choices for grammar I'm suggesting as I go along... What does it matter if the sun doesn’t shine? What does it ...
Feb 17, 2010
