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  • Archive Re: Inkling of Magic

    Jason The wagon rose and fell as it bundled into the castle. The rhythm would have been almost soothing if it wasn't for the stench of potato peelings and rotting ...

    Mar 22, 2010
  • Information Desk Archive Re: Badges Review: Good or Bad?

    I think it's all good. I like that there's no longer the feel of exclusivity that was linked with the coloured names. This way everyone who earns the badge has ...

    Mar 22, 2010
  • Archive Re: Assassins' bloodlines

    Please don't resurrect topics in the storybook archives without first sending a pm to myself or one of the appropriate junior moderators. I'll move this one to current storybooks for ...

    Mar 20, 2010
  • Archive Re: F.O.E.

    Kat has Taylor, the writer. And yeah, that sounds cool. Not your average audition requirement but why not XD

    Mar 19, 2010
  • Archive Re: F.O.E.

    Jessi Dueting with someone? Jessi had never tried that before but it sounded like a lot of fun, it sounded like the stuff dreams were made of. She was thinking ...

    Mar 18, 2010
  • Archive Re: Inkling of Magic

    Jason "This is pretty exciting though," I couldn't help but grin. I'd just seen a castle! And what a castle it had been. "Besides, was it just me or did ...

    Mar 18, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Seems Like Eternity

    Hey there! So I'm not sure which other you meant but here's a review on this one: “Melanie, stop,” I cried. I was running after her on along a dark ...

    Mar 18, 2010
  • Archive Re: Eidolon's Chains

    Lorcan It was cold. That was the first thing I noticed about this particular trip to the human world. I could feel the breeze snaking up my cloak and I ...

    Mar 18, 2010
  • Archive Re: F.O.E.

    I would if both my characters weren't occupied but maybe we can start bringing them all together soon? Merrick As he circled, Rickie was able to get a better view ...

    Mar 18, 2010
  • Archive Re: Nate's Dead?! (A Storybook not to scare anyone)

    Heather As they moved further and further into the Storybook Archives, Heather seemed to get a better grip on herself and her skin glowed green. She was a moderator. She ...

    Mar 16, 2010
  • Archive Re: Inkling of Magic

    Jason Running through the trees, I groaned as the branches whipped against my arms. Great. More scratches. Just what I ordered now where was my can of whup arse? Oh ...

    Mar 16, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: Question... Please Help!

    Hey there, welcome to YWS! I've edited your title so that it's within the site rules. Please keep in mind that we like good grammar here and full caps hurt ...

    Mar 16, 2010
  • Archive Re: F.O.E.

    Nope! There's two boys left, take your pick :) Merrick Dance. Just watching her move made the rhythm shoot up through his legs, through his torso, through his arms. He ...

    Mar 16, 2010
  • Archive Re: Nate's Dead?! (A Storybook not to scare anyone)

    Heather "Is it as bad as it seems?" Nutty asked in a worried tone. We were making our way to the edge of the storybooks section and as we walked, ...

    Mar 15, 2010
  • Archive Re: F.O.E.

    Jessica "I've come so faaar," Jessie sang softly as she pulled on her stripy socks. She caught a glance of her face in the mirror and winked. "And I'm not ...

    Mar 15, 2010


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