Rydia

Sorry about the delay, waaaaay too much work to do. Grrrr. Shaun Paladin; 9:30am; Day 2 All of this trouble was bad for business or rather it was good for ...

That's not a problem, I don't expect to be thanked for the reviews and when I am it's always a pleasant surprise :) I'll gladly take a look at it ...

Very suitable :) Maybe it could have the customary YWS blue background though?

Lucas Cordoy; Food and Water; Fire Setting up camp sounded like hard work. First we had to actually find a stream and as it was getting dark I was none ...

Lucas It hadn't been long into the fight when I realised that having an arrow and a couple of daggers was all very well if you could actually use them. ...

Lucas Cordoy; Food and Water; Ability to Build Fire A guy dressed in black was coming toward me. He looked like an assassin, so cool! That was what got me ...

I'll do the sections thing again as you're probably not in need of any more nit-picks ^^ Bathroom Slow that scene down. That's the perfect chance for JoJo to be ...

Hey hey ^^ Okay so you have quite a few reviews already which means I'm going to skip the nit-picks and go straight to some sectional advice. Characterization It's a ...

I rarely use it and would love to see the official polls there again. I loved those!

Lucas Cordoy; Food and Water; Ability to Build Fire It was hard to get my thoughts straight when there were so many foreign voices around me. I was Lucas. I ...

Name: Shaun Paladin Age: 26 Job: Bar Owner Sexual Orientation: Homosexual Description: A friendly, casual man who doesn't let anything worry him and who loves to be surrounded by a ...

No problems encountered here, I found it very easy to follow.

Poetry anthologies here I come XD

The trouble is there aren't enough weapons to go around. They've ll been taken now that my character has the food and water...

Name: Lucas Cordoy. Age: 15. Weapon: Large bag filled with food and water. SASS: Ability to build fire out of anything. Fears: Deep water and anything that could kill him. ...