Rydia

Hey Lava, I like the second one better, personally. The first isn't anywhere near as pretty looking.

my tutor can't stop going on about how much he wants to see sonnets, ballads, terza rimas. You name it, if it has a definate, nameable structure, my tutor wants ...

I like the info and the layout but maybe something colourful would be nice. There's a few YWS orientated illustrations you could use or possible make/ find a graphic of ...

Thanks Jas :) Since I'm still failing to find ideas, I'm going to try it my tutor's way. He loves to say that poems are just words and you just ...

Blue poppy: like a witch's, like the spiked leaves

Sorry, just hit another busy spell and semi forgot this was here... Takeo The walk home was pleasant, almost... normal. Takeo was starting to see that normal could actually be ...

You've got a lovely start here, but I think there's something lacking in the flow and I'd like to see you do more with your persona. In the first half ...

Inspiration, please come find me? 7. Open Your Eyes My eyes are closed. Are yours open, sweetheart? Sleeping right beside me, your body pressed against the sheets in sweet suffocation. ...

Name: Heather Gender: Female Star sign: Pisces Eye color: Amber-brown Clothing style: Casual or what my friends like to call 'girly with a touch of tom-boy'. I like pump shoes ...

I think I might start coming here for my inspiration. #2 and #4 are my favourites so far but I love your general use of word play and the register ...

Okay so another formatted poem. A villanelle this time. Trying to think of a better title, feel free to pitch in. 6. Distant Suicide. I thought I saw a meteor ...

I think this is one I'll have to finish off later. Just... feeling uninspired right now. 4. Erasing Birthdays I got old somewhere along the way and now I hardly ...

That last one's really nice, Omar. Sleep less. I want more like that one.

These are lovely, particularly Tulip and Lanterns. I will endeavour to give you some actual comments when I'm not so far behind (or alternatively I may give up and take ...

Thanks Jas, those are some good suggestions and yeah, gaping gown was meant to suggest hospital gown :) Finally finished my essay so I should be able to properly get ...