Rydia

Well howdy there. A very interesting poem you have here with some wonderful lines and an absolutely excellent tone. I find your choice of line breaks to be a little ...

I've not heard the song but this poem is beautifully written. I think there's a good, strong tone behind it, a lovely use of firm images and some nice sentiment. ...

Awesome idea! I'd like to be a girl but with cat ears and cat paws and a cat tail if that's possible? If not just make me a cat and ...

Hi there! You've got some very strong imagery in this poem and lines or words that really intrigue me, but they're intermingled with poor language or word choice which is ...

Greetings! Now, your title captured my attention because I'm always intrigued by the idea of an imaginary friend and I love all the little stories you hear surrounding them, but ...

Well hello there, an interesting poem you have here. I like the subject and I like some of your words but I think there's not a strong enough feeling or ...

There's actually a section on the site for lyrics, though it's not terribly out of place here. But if you'd like me to move it, just send a PM my ...

Hey there! So I'm not the best with lyrics but I thought I'd take a look and this is pretty cool. With your chorus, you should either just have (repeat ...

Hiya! First impression is that this is a little short for lyrics and maybe you should think about a chorus? Most lyrics have them and I find that they help ...

Takeo The flat was rather messy but that was mostly due to the fight with those nasty bad guys so she couldn't blame it on him, right? Right. But she ...

Hey there Buddy! I thought I'd start with this one since I'm more familiar with poetry :) I like what you have here and agree that it should be preserved ...

17. There Were Phantoms in the air There were phantoms in the air or so my daddy said and so I thought it true, how wonderful, with painted wings and ...

14. Planted Upside Down There was an occasion for fright on the night you abandoned the babe on my doorstep. Two eyes, brown like dirt and a tuft on his ...

Thanks Jas :) Well here's the but poem. I was trying to edit it a bit more before posting but it's time I move on or I'll never catch up. ...

Silas Quinn It wasn't until the Lady had gone that Quinn felt he could breathe again and the first thing that came out of his mouth was a snarl. Magic. ...