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Silas Quinn It was nightfall when they reached the entrance to the mine and Quinn pulled his horse to an expectant halt. He was at the head of the pack, ...

Well here you go: Underworlders- the Elders and the Assassins/Spies Name: Ariadne Damashreid. Goes by the name of 'Kylla' (Kill-ah) Age: 21 Race: Shapeshifter Appearance: Dark, raven hair that she ...

Hello there! This is quite lengthy so I'm going to make a few comments as I read through but rather than concentrating on nit-picks, I'll give you some more general ...

Hullo again :) So I like this, though not as much as the other as I felt it wasn't expanded enough. It's short and yet it rambles and there just ...

Why hello there! I think you've got an interesting plot here, some good descriptions and in general, a really nice story. You've done well in building the suspence and I ...

Ah, a dramatic monolgue. Now this takes me back to my high school. We spent a lot of time working on a few of these and I loved all the ...

Why hello again! So, I liked this. The title is catchy which is why I picked it out from your others and I wasn't disapointed by the poem that followed. ...

Hi there Ayla, welcome to the site! I'm rather into dark fiction myself, though not always the strongest taboos. I like to work with characters who are in some way ...

Why hello there my dear! You're pretty handy with a camera, huh? These are nice. Well. Two of them are more than nice but the other needs work. So. That ...

One tip I can give you is to think of it more as giving the writer comments. Just say what you liked and what you didn't like and then if ...

Done and done :)

Alright, here's a few specific comments to start us off: Crap. That was my home. Even if it was a bunch of weird creeps. Still. That was my house. [This ...

I haven't read the previous reviews so if I repeat something that just means there's an agreed consensus that you should fix it ;) Alright then, nit-picks first: I glanced ...

I've not seen much of the cartoon, though I vaguely recall the characters so I must have watched an episode or too, but I'll try to review this as well ...

Haiii! I am here to review but before I do, I'm actually amused to admit that this is so close to being the opposite of a poem I wrote during ...