Rydia

All caught up now, except for the last but I'm about to do that so... next please! :D

Why hello there, sorry about the brief delay on this. But, here I am! Now then, you've made some excellent revisions already, just thought I'd set your mind at rest ...

Hey there! I'm going to give you a few comments for the first poem as I think with the second you've taken some good advice but not done it justice. ...

Ariadne I made good speed on the way back to the city, travelling on my well muscled cheetah legs. There's no better way to move, seriously. Just feeling the power ...

American: 31 Canadian: 8 English British: 16 (Oh yeah she did xD) Filipino: 8 Finnish: 2 French: 2 Indian: 6 Irish: 1 Italian: 1 Puerto Rican: 1 Scottish: 1 South ...

Let me guess, Grandfather Time is the play on words for the first one, right? It's not bad, though I think you need to decide if you're drawing in 2D ...

I'm loving that we can clear the notifications now, very cool!

Drama: Send a PM to a mod then and find some people to agree to be your witnesses. Come on, if you wanna get narried, these things take work!

Neat! I shall go look at my 54 notifications xD

Amflifier: Just pick a mod and ask if they'll marry you! That's the people in the dark green, not the lighter ones. Annnd everyone has their own criteria for it ...

Dream: Our chars can meet again in a moment if you'd like? On her return journey she could smell him and decide to satisfy her curiosity before reporting back. Ariadne ...

Hey, hey! Alright so I'm a little conflicted over this one. On the one side, I love your tone and the content behind it is great; there's a wonderful story ...

Why hello there! Alright so I like this and I think you've done a great job at showing rather than telling. The descriptions were nice, though they had a slight ...

Why hello there! This is a pretty good early attempt at poetry, though you've fallen into a few common pit falls. First, the grammar. Now some poems do capitalise every ...

Hello there, my dear. I like this. Not as much as some of your other poetry as it is perhaps lacking in the sophistication and vivid imagery, but it's great ...