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Re: You Taught Me
I've seen this plot happen in films but never in a poem so bravo for that. It was unexpected and certainly caught my attention. This is good. Admittedly more in ...
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Re: My Attempt at a Sonnet
Why hello there! Sonnets huh? They're haaaard. I had to write one not so long ago for my poetry class and I really struggled with it. You seem to have ...
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Re: flip-curl literature
Hello my dear! So I like this, I think you have some strong words and images but it's a little over-loaded at the moment so that the reader doesn't know ...
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Re: Long VS Short?
I think that's a good post to end this on. *Locked*
May 29, 2011 -
Re: Portraits of Celebrities
Here as requested! I'm not really a one for votes but since the dispute is over names, I totally get the importance of that. My sister and I disagreed on ...
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Re: Heads Up About Things Happening in June
Have an amazing month in California, Nate! I envy you, really I do and try not to work too hard, yeah? It sounds like a fun place to take a ...
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Re: Easy Come, Easy Go
Well hello there, I said I'd read some of your stuff and now here I am. Told you not to hold your breath ;) Now then, I don't usually do ...
May 28, 2011 -
Re: Welcome New Members! [2]
Hello all, welcome, welcome! Skye: If you remain confused, feel free to send me a PM with any questions you have and I'll help you get on your feet. YWS ...
May 28, 2011 -
Re: Hi there !
Hello there, welcome to the site! Another fantasy author, awesome! I'm majorly in love with the genre and had never considered that it might not be popular in other countries, ...
May 28, 2011 -
Re: Hey there!
Hey there, Welcome to the site! I'm very glad you decided to join us, Mouse (may I call you that?) and don't worry, I'm not any good at the introduction ...
May 28, 2011 -
Re: Parallel chapter 1
Hello there! I just noticed this on my reading list so I figured you asked for a review at some point on one of the competition walls or something. Anyway! ...
May 28, 2011 -
Re: Review Day Check-In Thread
I'll be there :)
May 28, 2011 -
Re: The Essence of Nothing: A Series of Short Poems
Hello there. A series of short poems, hmm? Well they don't really work together or alone and they should have titles! There's some alright ideas here and a few good ...
May 28, 2011 -
Re: The UnBible: The New Testament: The Book of Luke
Hello again! I got a little distracted by some other reviews but here I am now to take a look at this one too :) I didn't find it very ...
May 28, 2011 -
Re: Don't worry 'Darling'
Why hello there! First off, I think your title needs work; whether it's the long or short version, it's just not catchy enough. A title is important, it can make ...
May 28, 2011
