Rydia

You ought to proof-read your work more carefully because it's a shame that so many mistakes should ruin this piece. There's a good plot going on here and some interesting ...

Hi! So I'm not quite sure what to make of this but since you've requested the review, I'll try my best to understand it. Here's some specific comments first: I ...

Hi there! Since I commented on a few other people's, I think it only fair if I come and give you some advice as well ^^ 1. I love that ...

Oooh ah! I've looked at quite a few of these now and I think this one is my second favourite, though it's quite a close call. Very cool choice of ...

I like both of these, though the first is defineately my fav as the second is just a little too busy in a slightly messy way. It's fun and it's ...

Only mods have the power to con duct marriages because we're awesome like that! Oh but you have to see an admin about divorces. Tricky businesses those, not something I ...

1. I like the old books and the dark background which gives it a more professional look than some of the others I've seen, but I think it's somewhat boring ...

Hi there! Alright so this is a little short and your reptition of 'shadowy' wasn't particularly effective, but I did like a few of the ideas you came up with. ...

Ah now this poem is much more to my liking, dear. You have strong images, a clear context and there's some really lovely lines and a great use of repetition, ...

Hello there! I won't review this in detail since it's an old poem and sentimental at that. I'm sure you've grown and developed as a writer anyway so I'll just ...

Hello there! You don't seem to have many reviews which is a shame because this is quite nice so let's see if I can correct this ;) First off, a ...

Why hello there! Alright so I like poetry like this which is passionate about helping people and making a difference, it's always very nice to read! It's perhaps a little ...

Heya! First off, I really like the end of this poem and what it builds up to, but I do wish it had gotten there faster. Your beginning was a ...

Hey there! So this is a cute little poem you've got but the grammar needs fixing, really it does! You shouldn't use abbreviations like thru in poetry unless you're making ...

Hello! I haven't read the other reviews so please forgive me for any repetitions but right, let's get started. First off, good, strong title. And I liked that it started ...