Rydia

1. Should we continue with Review Teams on Review Days? Yes! I love the comradely feel that you get when you're part of a review team and it's nice to ...

It's running really smoothly for me so awesome work, Nate!

Takeo It sounded like a crappy deal but they didn't have much choice so Takeo and the others slowly gave their consent and after that there wasn't much to talk ...

Perhaps 'Orchard' would work. That's what we'd call it :) Also, I will hopefully be able to post tomorrow after work so in the evening some time. Soorry it's so ...

Petronella The boy had always been quick on his feet so Petra wasn't surprised by his ready interruption, but she was angry. Not that it lasted for long. It was ...

I struggled to remember then how to like a work! But anyway, this is real cool and too fun to review seriously. I mean there's a few little nit-picks like ...

Well finally I've reached the chapter you actually wanted reviewing! After this, if you post any more, either write on my wall or send me a pm to let me ...

Next chapter, whoo! Line-By-Line “Zavier! The water’s on, and the fuel ' s low, hurry!” Zora’s loud voice hollered from the front door. I threw down the stack of wood ...

Hi again, getting closer to that fourth chapter ;) Line-By-Line Three days. Three days my only daughter had gone with out [Without is one word.] talking to me, it was ...

Gender: Female Middle/High school/year in college: Just finished 2nd year university, studying Creative Writing and English Educational info on life-sciences: Highschool and a little research into it

Petronella I had given no warning of my arrival and knew that the ploy would only work if I descended on the brothers first and straight away, without stopping to ...

Hi there! Sorry about the delay. I've taken another look at your prologue though and it's looking much better so good work. Allow me to take a look at this ...

Hi again! Sorry its taken me so long to get to this. Let's see then. Line-By-Line “Katie, I swear, it was my alarm ' s fault. It went off late ...

Hi there, sorry this took me a while to get to! Alright so I like this. You have a very easy to read style and I think you build the ...

Hi, sorry about the slight delay on this. First off, here's a few specific comments: Doors, That was one of the first things I remember thinking as a little girl. ...