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Re: Hello :)
Hi, welcome! YWS is a good place to come for experimenting and finding your own style. We've got a lot of people on here and not one of them writes ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Welcome New Members! [2]
Hi Jessica! Welcome to the site, I hope everything is going well so far :) We do have a few artists here so you could always look around the art ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Hi there!
Hi, welcome to the site! I haven't read that series, though I think I might have to now. Anything with Nicholas Flamel in the title is worth checking out! My ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Hello
In the spirit of review day, I shall welcome you, though you be mine enemy! I have a feeling I don't really need to explain the ropes, but if you ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Entry for Story Title Contest
Oh! This is an interesting idea for a contenst, very creative! Let's see then, I shall review your title choices based on how well they flow, how well they fit ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: In Oculis Draconis DT
Mark I have to agree, you're being a bit confusing adding all these new NPC's! I thought we had enough dragons already according to your last post ;) Why not ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Running
Hi again, buddy! Okay, before I start I should say that this wasn't to my liking. The review to follow will be critical and less about how you could improve ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: looking in a mirror with a reflection not quite the same.
Hello! Let's see what you have here... oooh. Interesting. So you're a bit repetetive and could use some more imagery, some more atmosphere. But I love where you start from ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: deleted
Hi there! Okay so first, your title. It's a little over-wordy for my liking. I think you could make it more snappy like 'Mirror Girl' or 'Look in the Mirror' ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: SPEW
Something Purposefully Elusive and Wonderful
Aug 27, 2011 -
Re: In Oculis Draconis *Dead*
Emperor Zarin | Northern Courtyard Falling to his knees, the Emperor knew it was over. He could feel his White but she was ever so distant and her body lay ...
Aug 27, 2011 -
Re: The Fundamentals (Accepting)
Aurora Clavelle - Earth They were bowing to her. And strangely, Rory didn't feel awkward. She felt... pleased. Respected. It was a very nice feeling and refreshing after all the ...
Aug 26, 2011 -
Re: The Literary Journal Gifting Game
I'll gift some copies and my charge is that you write two reviews, welcome one new member and send me either a YWS gift or 50 points. Anyone up for ...
Aug 26, 2011 -
Re: Help Promote the Literary Journal - Updated with Flyers
Claire now has a copy so that's one more off the shelves ^^
Aug 25, 2011 -
Re: Help Promote the Literary Journal - Updated with Flyers
I'm getting my sister to buy a copy and will see who else I can persuade!
Aug 25, 2011
