Rydia

Hi! This is a very nice poem, lovely sentiments and a great conclusion but I think your lines could flow a little more smoothly in places. Shall we take a ...

Alright so another excellent chapter, but you're at least a little right about the action scene. It doesn't feel all that actiony and I didn't get much of an idea ...

Hello my dear! I believe I promised you a nice, shiny review before the month is out and since the month is almost out, here you go... Or at least ...

Hi, hi! Time for chapter four then :) “Fine,” he grumbled, “five pieces of silver.” I was in no mood to argue so passed over the coins. He had a ...

Okay I'm going to lock this one for you as it is posted in the wrong section. If you click contests in the top header, it should be pretty easy ...

Why hello there little sister! I thought I'd add my review to these other fine people's. I really like how you've done my hair, you've made my quick up-do look ...

Okay so I don't normally review fan-fic but I love X-Men (and Gambit

I have to agree with Snoink, the author commentary was really great and added another level of humour to the piece! I too would have liked to see more of ...

Hai! This is very nice. I don't actually have that many comments for you but as they say, every little helps so here you go: You had me with, two ...

Hi, hi! Okay so I'm not sure what the part at the beginning is? Only it's too short to be a prequel so maybe you meant fot it to be ...

Sounds like a really good read, sort of another take on the whole virus invasion thing but with aliens and stuff thrown in? I might have to check it out. ...

Hi hi! The wind blew past Elena’s hair, the soft cool wind. [The repetition is good here but you should follow it up. If you're going to draw so much ...

Hi there! Let's see what you have here, I think I will start with a few line-by-line comments... Title: Okay so the alliteration is cool but other than that, your ...

Hi Fred, welcome to the site! As you can see, we're a really friendly community so I'm sure you'll meet lots of nice people here and soon feel at home. ...

Hi, welcome! I think what you've written is amazing. The brevity of it just takes my breath away and- okay all I see is a period too. But perhaps someone ...