Rydia

Okay just waiting for two more people to sign up, then I'll draw partners for this round!

Hi, welcome to both of you! John, what's your original language if you don't mind me asking? I greatly admire people who know a second language and even more so ...

Nicely done demon!

Emperor Zarin | Northern Courtyard Everything was clearing. He still hurt, Lord did he hurt, but it was more seperate now. More as if... as if it wasn't his pain ...

I'm totally in!

Heya! Okay so my first comment is for the title. No Name. It's a little ordinary and doesn't excite much interest. I'm thinking that Nameless would be better, or perhaps ...

Hey, hey ^^ Alright so my first thoughts are that this feels a little disjointed and while there's somewhere there, the flow isn't quite right and the tone's a little ...

Haiiiii just little old me :D Line-By-Line My daughter and her Chink fiance were on the way for dinner and the night. [Slightly awkward phrasing. Maybe simply leave it at, ...

Haiii! Okay so you have a beautiful beginning, though I'm not sure that 'scorned' is the right word in that second line. It feels really awkward and it's hard to ...

Hai! Here I am as promised, sorry it took a while ^^ Line-By-Line Captain Needew and his men were on this flight for five hours now, they were deep in ...

Hi Neo, you must live just around the corner from me because I'm from Narnia too! Hehe, welcome to the site ^^ You'll find that everyone here's really friendly and ...

Hi apple! I think I've seen your brother around, well welcome to the site! You probably won't need me to answer any questions since Bekway can probably tell you stuff ...

Hi Skye! Graphic and web design sounds pretty cool and they're useful tools, even in the writing industry. I'm sure you'd be really good at promoting your novels or others' ...

Hi Kayli, that's a really pretty name! And welcome to the site! As you've probably found out already, the people here are really friendly so if you need any help ...

Hai! Okay so some of you know about the Buddy Stystem but most of you do not. Basically, its something that's been around for a long time, though it's had ...