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Hi Alyssa, beautiful name by the way! Welcome to YWS :D Oscar Wilde is a good choice of favourite author, one of the best classics out there. I'm more into ...

Hi Horizon, welcome! Could I call you Horrie? I don't know why, but that's the nickname that comes to mind and while it's not exactly a shortening *shrugs* Anyway, any ...

Hi Kellis, welcome to YWS! What specifically do you need help with? Finding your way around or just finding an opening into the community or something else? Whatever it is, ...

1. The lady's shoulders are a bit too wide for her head so you might want to slim those down a little. The arm looks like it isn't even attached ...

Hi! So I'll get to the second part of Serpent's Teeth later, possibly today, but this is also on my review list and it's next in line. I'm not sure ...

Hi again! Time to take a look at chapter nine... Specifics 1. Why would Victor be the one holding the grudge? It was your main character (I always forget his ...

Hai again! I might get to the last chapter today as well, but I'm not sure. Let's see how it goes, shall we? Specifics 1. Valndra walked back and forth ...

It's perhaps a little too late to help you change it before class! But I shall give you a review anyway because improvement is important and you can always show ...

I know what a Deaus Ex Machina is! I'm terrible at saying/ spelling it though and had to copy your title admittedly xD But yeah, my teacher loves reminding me ...

Rap, neat! We don't see that often here and I'm perhaps not the best person to review - I can't rap to save my life - but I can give ...

Okay so my first thoughts about this was 'Argghhhh! I am scared of all those long lines' because long lines are really scary when they're not broken up into stanzas ...

Okay so I haven't read the previous chapter which means all comments are going to be in context of this one alone. With that said, on to the review! Specifics ...

That's okay, Stells! Just get back to us as soon as you can and until then we'll keep up the posting fun :)

Hello my darling! Probably too late for the contest, but I thought I'd give you a review anyway

Idahlia; The Temple Gardens It was late, but that had never stopped her before. And it wouldn't stop her now. Although... These were troubled times. It made Idahlia feel bad ...