Rydia

Hi! Sorry about the delay on this, but I'm finally here to take a look at the revised edition :) I'm loving most of the changes! Just a few suggestions... ...

Check the storybook, I already did lol.

Maybe. It looked like really cool place xD

Eddy could maybe meet up with the beast and beauty? And Asta I think is heading down to Praesa ^^

Edward the Woodcutter ; Somewhere in an unknown forest with Asta the Wolf Praesa. The Wolf was doing bad things then if she was associating with Praesa, everyone knew that ...

"Charlie," Kitty said sadly as the smoke cleared to reveal the absense of her friend. She turned her eyes away for a moment out of respect for the sacrifice he'd ...

Kitty felt bad about what had happened to Lumi, but she wasn't sure that letting Charlie keep him as a pet was a good idea. They already had one almost ...

Hi! Sorry about the delay on this, I've been on a bit of a reviewing break, but hopefully it shouldn't be too long before I get to chapter two now. ...

Hi! Sorry I didn't respond to this earlier, if I'd looked at how short it is, I'd have come sooner! But never mind, here's a few things for you to ...

Hai! Apologies for the delay, my dear, but here I am to review :) Specifics 1. The beginning looks messy. I think it could be tidied up and still have ...

kyllorac got inside the vault just in time for the others to pull the big, heavy doors closed tight, crushing some zombie fingers in the process. Inside the vault it ...

I'll post soon, just waiting until it's day time as there isn't really much for my darling to do before then ^^

Plans. Weren't those things supposed to be her department? "Uh-" said kitty, stalling for time. This wasn't really her area. She had powers here, yes. But she always felt a ...

If you're volunteering guys, make sure you read the part about how to apply! To apply, you simply need to pm me and tell me what you feel you would ...

Eddy and ze wolf need to meet up with people too. They could be in any country right now so I may have them stumble across one of the other ...