Rydia

Hai! Okay, so a long time ago I said I'd ask you for a review, but I ended up not finishing that piece of writing because I'm such a good ...

Come closer, Reader. Closer. Lean in, just so. Come, take a seat on my devil's side and incline your ear to my dark tale. It is not a nice story. ...

Oh look, you get two in a row this time ;) Specifics 1. Do we really need so much explanation of the name? No. Cut it. The reader doesn't want ...

Specifics 1. The first sentence could use some work. It's fragmented and awkward; not the best way to start a chapter. At least use 'The wind' but it would be ...

The Link: What: A spontaneous storybook. The aim for this session will be to start a storybook like no other, where people do not take days to write profiles, invent ...

Thunderous voices, so loud that Xerin couldn't make out the words, came crashing through from the next room as the humans made their approach. And Xerin's feet touched down on ...

Hi! I'm quite happy to review it anyway so no worries and no problem :) Right, let's see what you have here... Specifics 1. Why does he keep stopping to ...

Hai! I'm Galaxy and this is my friend, Spike. We're both pretty pink as you can see...

Yep. Apparently I am giving this a go, though my head and I haven't yet had the conversation about where it's going to fit in our schedule.

20,000, so cool! Or uh... whatever the number has risen to since? xD

What Hawk said:

Two more volunteers and then I'll draw the pairings for this round, who's up for it?

SparkOfDoubt has the best reason ever, alas, if only that were true xD

Hi! Well let's see what you have here... Specifics 1. He was bent and sucking like a landed carp. His eyes vacant, peering out at the canvas from looped bruise ...

Hai! Let's see what you have here... Specifics 1. Names. I am actually going to have to start here. Usually I am willing to turn a blind eye in fantasy ...