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Re: 2011 YWS Most Award WINNERS
Whoo results! Congratulations (I think?) to the winners and thanks so much for doing this Jabs. I love you
Jan 13, 2012 -
Re: The Great Review Challenge of 2012
Day Ten! In less than twenty-four hours the contest will be over so let's see some crazy reviewing tonight! I'll be doing the final tally at 10:00am tomorrow morning (GMT) ...
Jan 12, 2012 -
Re: The First Last Stand of George T. A. Montgomery: Chapter 1
Hi! Sorry its taken me so long to get to this. I made a note to write you a review but then, what with the craziness of the holidays and ...
Jan 12, 2012 -
Re: A Shell I Am
Imagery As 'Rina commented, you're using too many adjectives in this poem when sometimes less is more. Firstly, the image you're trying to present is of an empty shell, but ...
Jan 12, 2012 -
Re: Photogaphy
Haiiii! Okay so I haven't read the other reviews so my apologies if I repeat anything! 1. I love the poppies! I wish there wasn't such a dramatic difference in ...
Jan 12, 2012 -
Re: The Great Review Challenge of 2012
Day Eight and Nine! This count being taken as of 19:50 GMT. The yellow team are protecting their lead well, nobody has come anywhere near to taking them yet! The ...
Jan 11, 2012 -
Re: L Deathnote fanart
First off, I have to say that I love Death Note! Like so much, it's a great anime. I was more fond of Kira than L, but that's just personal ...
Jan 11, 2012 -
Re: The Great Review Challenge of 2012
Hi all! I'm having some trouble with my internet over here as someone in the village drove into a telephone pole and there's been some wire damage. The phone lines ...
Jan 10, 2012 -
Re: Team Staff
Don't worry about it, Demsi! You've gone great already
Jan 10, 2012 -
Re: The Great Review Challenge of 2012
Eeeek! I forgot to update your count in the top five, sorry dear. All fixed now xD
Jan 10, 2012 -
Re: The Great Review Challenge of 2012
Day Seven! This count being taken as of 23:05 GMT. Sorry it's so late, I half forgot the reason I was reviewing and then I realised I hadn't posted the ...
Jan 9, 2012 -
Re: voting is a serious issue! (16 voting)
Hai! So I've been feeling sorry for the poor neglected General Articles section lately and decided I should review something here. Well guess what, I chose your piece! You should ...
Jan 9, 2012 -
Re: Gryphon
Oh Ky, the line art on this is so lovely! Could you perhaps lay the outline on to a black background and have it traced in white instead or shade ...
Jan 9, 2012 -
Re: Dragonmaster Chapter 18: Disappearance
Haiii! I'm back for another chapter :D Awkward Sentences A few pieces of awkward phrasing here and there so I thought I'd pick some out and give you a few ...
Jan 9, 2012 -
Re: Rural England's knell
Hai! First off, let me say that I love the tone you've got here. There's a certain relentless feel to it that just builds beautifully as the poem goes on ...
Jan 9, 2012
