Ruth

Hi there, I'm Grin. Right. Well, this was a little short, but it was sweet and with some work it will be rather nice. It could really be elongated, you've ...

Hi! I'm Grin. I love your idea here. It's something many of us have been through, leaving school, leaving friends. It's hard when all you're left with is memories. I ...

Hi, I'm Grin. This was nice. It has a lot of potential, but it was a little short, it didn't quite seem long enough. Right, you've started this with prose. ...

Hi, I'm Grin, it's nice to meet you. :) If the idea you're trying to put across is hell at the end there, maybe it would be better to talk ...

I liked it. Van had all the main errors for me, so I won't go into that. I will agree that if you had some sort of rhythm to this ...

Hi! I liked it. The lack of capitalisation worked, but I didn't quite get why you capitalised Rose - is Rose the flower, or a girl? And you've capitalised Background, ...

Hi, I'm Grin, it's very nice to meet you. :) I agree with Kat, there are a couple of moments where you've been too repetetive for comfort. This is hard ...

I didn't vote, because I don't think a poll is necessary - that's what reviews are for. So I thought it would make more sense to explain how I felt ...

Hi there! This is really different, and I quite enjoyed it. It's very refreshing, I tell you. I've never been quite comfortable with haikus - I have what my friends ...

Hi, I'm Grin. I'm going to start out with your rhyme - Ed and Amy are right, it does sound a little forced. Now I did like it, and the ...

Lydia, thank you. My nan, who's 96, is ill at the moment - she's really frail, has lived in a care home for years, and the cold just got to ...

Hi, I'm Grin. Well, I really liked this. It was really sweet and some of your imagery is absolutely lovely. I won't nitpick your punctuation, because there's so much to ...

Heh, Jiggs doesn't have to laugh at Snoink, but I am. ... *jokes* Don't fire me, Snoink. Please?

Hi there :) Lydia has all the grammatical errors, but poetry doesn't have to be grammatical. (Sorry, Lyd!) I like the whole no-capital-letter thing, but I will redeem myself by ...

Hi! I'm Grin, it's nice to meet you. I'm afraid I can't add anything more than what's already been said. Lydia's right, the rhythm is a bit broken. But honestly, ...