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Hi! Okay, this hit hard with a very powerful ending. But it's building up to the ending that breaks the story a little. 1. Grammar. It's not as good as ...

Hey! I'm sorry it took so long to get back on to this. Okay. This is definitely improved, and pulled me in much more powerfully. But the first sign I ...

Hi! You have a lovely idea here. It makes me want to be intrigued by this, if that makes sense, but there's just something stopping me from being pulled in. ...

Darnit! School night. D: Anyone know a way to record it and listen back afterwards?

I was a little late D: Still, I'm here now :D and this is fun. *giggles*

ChristsServant, for having a unique, practical and helpful way of being supportive, and for always surprising me with how stunning she really is.

So, I thought I'd try something different - this is about the electrical stimulation of the heartbeat, which you can read about here . I know it's appalling, so please ...

Hey! Well, this was chilling. Given the theme of the poem, that's a good thing. I was very emotionally involved with this character, you've really demonstrated the effect war(?) has ...

Hey! Okay. I really like the storyline. And the way you've told it to your reader sort of second-hand... that's brave. I think it could work incredibly well, but you ...

Hey! Okay, I really liked this. It's very unique, and I was really drawn in by the emotions of the narrator. There's an air of mystery that I can't quite ...

For being ruthless with nicknames. :D

Congrats, LPR! Also! I approve. 8/10

Huh. I liked that. I really did, it's got a fantastic concept and it's told really well. It's the right length, a little snippet, and it's full of emotion. I ...

I was just in a really good mood.

What this reminds me of is the bit in the Bible when God destroyed a city, saving only Lot and his family. He told them not to look back, but ...