Ruth

Cute! 8.5/10

Timmy, I had a few people PM me with that same problem when I first restarted the Christian Writers group. What it was for them was that their requests to ...

Hey! The first thing that struck me when I read this was the format. This doesn't look much like a poem; this might be the wrong place for you to ...

Banned for quoting both a character and a writer in your signature.

I do love that line, but it was a bit hard to read. Also, the character is hot intriguing. xD 8/10

Heh, this seems somewhat amusing... Ask as many questions as you like, I've got too much free time on my hands lately. (Also, it should be spelled Questionnaire, dearie...

Hey! Okay, I liked this. The ending concept was very effective, and you've really put a lot of effort into creating a scene which your reader can imagine. And you've ...

Oh... um... is it by any chance the BFG? *answers own question* Probably not. xD "It's like I married my best friend, but in a totally manly way!"

Ooh, very pretty! But it strains my eyes a little. Of course, I'm biased because one of said eyes can't see anything clearly more than a few inches away. 9/10

Hi! Okay, you've picked a great theme here. Most, if not all readers can really relate to it, and as a consequence you don't have to work quite as hard ...

Hey! Okay, the first thing that struck me as the page loaded was the presentation. The central alignment kind of threw me off here, and I didn't see any significant ...

Aww, this should've gone to town yesterday. *pouts* And Ranger, that is my favourite lyric. :D 10/10

Yay! *snuggles Skinny*

Hi, FeatherBlue. Welcome to YWS! If there's anything you need, you can feel free to PM me, I'll be happy to help you out. Okay, you have a nice concept ...

Hi! I hate to say it, but what I thought when I read through this was "Twilight". It's an over-used concept, and frankly, there's very little to it. What you ...