Rune

I've had mixed reactions to this, some people think it's too heavy, other people think it's good. I'm not sure myself. Scream: Scream… Not to be heard. The World is ...

Wow, this is really good in a scary sort of way. I love the imagery, and how you portray an emo's life from his/her point of view. I only hvae ...

This like Pratchett's DEATH meets the Book Thief. I had my doubts when I started reading (because of the quintillions of clichés I've seen that start with "today I met ...

Hi Harshi :) You have an almost well written piece overall but there are three things you can do to make it better. Although I get that the variations of ...

I'm never going to be able to compete, you seem to be churning out good poems every other day. Give me a moment *nitpick scanner on....* Nope, nothing all I ...

Hi Aki :) Brilliant poem, and I have to nitpick to criticize it. Most of the reviewers have already done a good job of it. I found this verse a ...

Hi Aki :) Brilliant poem, and I have to nitpick to criticize it. Most of the reviewers have already done a good job of it. I found this verse a ...

Hi Aki :) Brilliant poem, and I have to nitpick to criticize it. Most of the reviewers have already done a good job of it. I found this verse a ...

Hi Aki :) Brilliant poem, and I have to nitpick to criticize it. Most of the reviewers have already done a good job of it. I found this verse a ...

Before I begin to review, please forgive me for what I'm about to say. Thank God for the P.S. I was started losing the will to live after reading the ...

You certainly have a lot of conflict this makes it a good piece, I could see it happening after the first few words. But your writing is limited by the ...

About how the world seems when life goes bad. It probably needs refining, be as mean and brutal as you like. ============ You exist! Oh Joy!! I must come 'round ...

Hi Kafka :) Before I start I just want to say that I haven't read the other reviews so forgive me if I am redundant also if I am over-critical. ...

like they desperately needed to cut some tension Where is the tension? Unless it is between Harry and Ron. That means that HP has been reduced to a soap-opera, so ...

I didn't say that the 7th was worse than the 6th. NOTHING is worse than the 6th, but it is still very bad when you compare it to the first ...