Rubric

Hmm, sounds good but I'm not a hundred percent sure that I fit the requirement. Some of my stuff like: or seems to fit the requirements, but I may be ...

Can't say I'm not displeased with the lack of interest here peeps. The one request I make is that the work hasn't already been overreviewed already. This is for all ...

Snoink is this really an either or dichotomy (which I think is also a false dichotomy?) Gadi. wrote: Quote: But I do believe I actually support abortion in the case ...

Hopefully

Nice work for a first piece! I couldn't find any errors, but here's some advice for changes as a matter of style (take it or leave it, some would disagree ...

Hmm I agree with W, don't change your novel just to have the character: characters serve the plot and no other master. But I mean, if the novel is improved ...

Thanks SaraAnne and everyone else who reviewed this work! At the moment I'm considering it to be an epilogue for Exiles, though it could find itself being a prologue for ...

"Louis?" Tobias the Gym Instructor's voice was undercut by the savage sawing sound of the rowing machine. "Jeez, how long have you been in here for?" "Since Six, after my ...

How many more do we need? Just filling out the dorms or what? I'm just thinking that an overloaded storybook is likely to flop.

Wow, yeah sorry about that one Snoink, I've never encountered this viewpoint before and arrogantly brushed it off as satire. I'm truly sorry about that, and the article proved to ...

Hola, I'm Rubric and I've be reviewing you today! Down to business: porch light was the only light illuminating the murky alley you've a repetition of "light" here. Might be ...

Hmm, just two spelling mistakes in here. cast away wit fear *with* fear that seek rule. "that seek *to* rule" maybe? Fantasy authors always seem to love a good ol' ...

Snoink is this a straw man or just ordinary satire? Failing that is it merely an argument I haven't come across before? You really do tend to throw the spanner ...

Name: Louis Gwenvir Eveque (in international language is pronounced "LOO-iss GWEN-vir EVER-kee) Age: 16 Speciality: Generic Biology, but specialises in related areas of chemistry. Overall has become f

Robbing the bank had been a good idea at the time; but like communism, it seemed far harder a plan to implement than formulate.