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This looks a bit like a synopsis, so I'm not sure if you're looking for an edit, or what kind of edit you're looking for They think there better There ...

I am the white tower of your admonition. Built in the shadow of your endeavour I have transcended your very nature to serve as your taskmaster. You come to me ...

Hey Jai, I know you said it's closed, but I feel I owe you my $0.02 Positive discrimination has already come up, but I have never met an aboriginal person ...

you do realise your defending a country that's committed war crimes As opposed to Saudi Arabia, Hamas, Iran and other neighbours, who are upstanding champions of human rights (I apologise ...

TheTruthTeller I'm not anti Jew I'm anti Israel except one but he's a Jew so dosen't really count Wait, what? Both sides have done, and are currently involved in programs ...

Another way, (my way), of looking at it is that when you write about an anti-hero you're asking "what makes a hero a hero?" What can you strip away from ...

To be honest, the topic is far too broad and ambiguous to be meaningfully addressed. What do you mean by religion? You also can't really answer the question making a ...

Hey, back again! Hopefully this review won't drag on too long, but I do tend to get caught up in the flow of it. the Speaker Is this the only ...

Hey. Couldn't spot anything that needed fixing in terms of spelling and such, so I've gon ewith a very subjective "this is how I would edit it if I was ...

Thanks for the input guys! I *may* have written it at five am after just having walked home and a bit drunk, so it's a bit stream-of-consciousness. That's why there's ...

There was something beautiful about the night. Though it was no stronger than a stiff breeze, there was a deeper vibrancy to the wind. It seemed to cajole and taunt, ...

The human race is so cushy now; people don't have to work hard to survive because everything is served on a platter by technology - to put it simply, we ...

Hey Maha, The ultimatum is often laid down that Jesus was either Liar Lunatic or Lord, specifically because he claimed repeatedly and unambiguously to be God. A quick google search ...

Animals like elephants and dolphins can have a keen sense of community and ritual, and the way we treat animals in general has no real relation to how they should ...

Skins I just don't understand how what other people get up to in their bed effects anyone else. I don't believe that being with someone the same sex as you ...