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  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Faith

    Your not, your not, your not You're Unbeliever segued into mockery and mockery segued into her self righteousness "Unbeliever" seems to be something that is used or said, whereas mockery ...

    Sep 1, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: The Fauxwind Chronicle

    the Fauxwind world Consistency in terminology is important. Is it Fauwind, the Fauxwind world or FauxWinds? Have one of these, but not all. Even to survive, tradition must change. More ...

    Jul 31, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: W.A.M. School (Warrior Mage Assasin)

    The thick misty fog distracted my sight, although magic helped it get cleared, I couldn’t deny the fact that I am nervous. Ok. You've got 3 ideas in this sentence ...

    Jul 29, 2011
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: Nuclear Weapons

    I heard a story related by an Australian nuclear policy expert regarding the Cuban missile crisis, it was one of a half dozen examples of how close we have come ...

    Jul 29, 2011
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: Colin Strider Chapter Four

    I believe I'm overdue to give you another review. perspiration dripping down every inch of his body This is pretty strong, you could just go with "dripping with perspiration". warehouse.. ...

    Jul 29, 2011
  • Fiction Discussion Re: Name finding tips

    Name's are a great opportunity for character development, not for the named character but for the parents who choose the name. Sure naming traditions have waned in the West, but ...

    Feb 7, 2011
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: Global Warming - The Turning Point

    How does the "Christ is coming" point actually relate to this debate? Christ is coming, look busy? Christ is coming, so ignore what science tells us so that we can ...

    Dec 20, 2010
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: Caning Children

    JOJO at what point is it justified? Either caning or spanking, I can't see it. I can understand the expediency and short-term benefits easily enough, but all it teaches children ...

    Dec 20, 2010
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: Caning Children

    That right there is why we have so many kids who disrespect their elders and teachers and each other these days. Way back then, spanking was done my a majority, ...

    Dec 6, 2010
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: Genetically Modified Foods

    I've heard that too Shiney, but I've also heard that there are other factors to consider, including the fact that the sexualisation of children as a social force has been ...

    Dec 6, 2010
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: Existence of God

    Self-fulfilling prophecy is a fallacy. Self Fulfilling prophecy is a manifestation of the circular logic fallacy, Shiney seems to be guilty of the poisoning the well fallacy and making an ...

    Dec 6, 2010
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: What is personhood?

    I don't see why you were so determined to replace the subject of the debate with "human" rather than "person", when it was the former, rather than the latter, which ...

    Nov 27, 2010
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: Existence of God

    MeanMrMustard Yak, yak, yak. What does your example have to do with anything? Oh, that you're MISSING the point! You seem to be getting pretty disrespectful in how you conduct ...

    Nov 27, 2010
  • Fiction Discussion Re: How to write about very powerful characters?

    None of my major pieces have done this but a few things I picked up in shorter projects included: - Clear boundaries. To explain why heroes or villains haven't simply ...

    Nov 27, 2010
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Rose

    Howdy, I tried to be thorough in my review, so the fact that I've highlighted quite a bit doesn't mean your work is poor, just that I tried to go ...

    Nov 24, 2010


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