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Re: Fantasy/Sci-Fi/Adventure Post here for detailed reviews.
Hey Dude (and everyone else) I'm doing some intense exam revision for the next week, so I'll be a bit slack on reviews until then. It could be that your ...
Jun 19, 2012 -
Re: Is my idea too complicated? (feedback please)
Doable: Definitely. Easy: No. I would love to read this though, and would be willing to committ time to reviewing sequential portions of a large piece of it. The biggest ...
Jun 18, 2012 -
Re: Fantasy/Sci-Fi/Adventure Post here for detailed reviews.
Done. Hope it was helpful.
Jun 13, 2012 -
Re: Fantasy/Sci-Fi/Adventure Post here for detailed reviews.
Done!
Jun 11, 2012 -
Re: Premarital Sex-Your Views
There's a bit of a problem underlying this debate that can be best illustrated through this: "Parents (Excluding the abusive people who are not fit to be called parents)" If ...
Jun 5, 2012 -
Re: Fantasy/Sci-Fi/Adventure Post here for detailed reviews.
Done!
Jun 2, 2012 -
Re: Opinions?
Howdy. I think the concept is interesting, but does tread on familiar ground. It sounds a little like a cross between the tv show Heroes and the Nightwatch movies. However ...
May 31, 2012 -
Re: Fantasy/Sci-Fi/Adventure Post here for detailed reviews.
Title says it all. I'm doing a bit of a splurge of my own at the moment on my new project Enslaved to Duty, and for that I need points! ...
May 30, 2012 -
Re: Enslaved to Duty
I've powered through the first four scenes and am pretty fine with how they look as a first draft. I'm incredibly thankful for the feedback I've gotten so far: it's ...
May 30, 2012 -
Re: Enslaved to Duty
Hey. A few of you will know me from the debating forum, most of you won't. I've been a long time lurker on the site, but haven't found time to ...
May 28, 2012 -
Re: Advice on this story?
I think shifting his overarching goal during the story is a good way to chart his character growth. In the beginning he's probably just fleeing because the BAD guys are ...
May 28, 2012 -
Re: Lord Larinian
Do you find this helps with your writing? It looks impressive.
May 28, 2012 -
Re: The Path To Achieving Peace
I am sorry, but if you come onto my land and I ask you to leave and you do not. Then yes I will shoot you. Maybe not kill you, ...
May 28, 2012 -
Re: The Path To Achieving Peace
Things that would result in execution under the rules as they stood at the time of my post. 1. A person who has funded an unsuccessful defence at trial pro ...
May 27, 2012 -
Re: Satanism
In regards to the list of "contradictions" I scrolled through it and found very little that wasn't ripped out of context/a reasonable ambiguity of translation. Most of the claims are ...
May 21, 2012
