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Cheers guys on this one. As it's fallen off the front page, i doubt it'll get any more critiques so I'll answer them now. I think answers are kind of ...

Kitty, you did a great job on Sable, cheers for starting the character interaction quick question "What the hell? A cheater..." refers to what exactly? otherwise all good

"Said the voice of a woman unseen" "came the voice of an unseen woman" voices do not speak, people speak. similarly it should be "unseen woman" not "woman unseen" "everywhere ...

Sable: Hitchen "Thank you Mr Desmond, but I think I shall have to decline..." Sable began. "No, no, no! This man is too dangerous for this, you can't deny him. ...

Sable: Hitchen Sable sat, looking speechlessly at the photo. The boy looked to be enjoying himself immensely, despite the cold climate. He looked a little younger than Sable's constant companion, ...

Hey Angel, I Haven't been a member of this forum for long either, I found it through google. Which is your prefferred genre? What do you consider to be your ...

Bahahahaha, 9/10 Syd, that is *too* cute

I loved studying this play, but when our class saw it performed, it was slightly ruined my modernisation. The director had changed the ending to make it more dramatic by ...

On Principle I refuse to let this idea die. Person who's character is heading toward me, I need a word as too your plans, unless such talk isnt the done ...

Name: Desmond Gender: Male Age: Unknown Location: Hitchen Appearance: (Most often & current) 6 foot tall, wavy brown hair, with a well trimmed beard. Sometimes wears thick Ability: Shapeshifting (in ...

Sable: Hitchen The two men sat at the large desk, looking at one another face to face across the clear white expanse. Desmond reached into his briefcase and extracted a ...

Considering the entire novel's about (other than bashing the church), the true relevance of a childhood innocence in society/life, I couldn't believe that they over-censored this movie. All this stuff

Sable: Hitchen There were ambulance lights reflected in the glass windows of the store as Sable was led away by the police. The boy had come at him with a ...

Everybody: Hmm, I think I may have written this a little too quickly, which is partly why it is so fast paced. I think I could throw in some more ...

"furiously fast thoughts " Never, ever make it obvious that you are *trying* for alliteration. It needs to be natural, though we all fall for this at one time or ...