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"I am still here, she said, open the door. " okay if this is speech it needs speech makrs, if it's thought-speech it need to be italicised. "the exact same ...

"thin peasant clothes" hmm, maybe just "threadbare" or "poorly made". "peasant" is a little too much of a contrived exposition. "froze under the icy cobbled " are his feet actually ...

Sable: Hitchen The car raced along the country road, responding effortlessly to the woman's effort. She must have been a very accomplished driver, because the car almost seemed to be ...

The army’s camp was in the hills to the south of the now carrion-infested ground where the battle had taken place. Around the great fires, soldiers celebrated alongside their officers, ...

"I was under the impression that this debate was about hunting - the act of killing an animal. Therefore, your comments on the work that goes on afterwards are completely ...

*salutes the flag* god bless america well we in the rest of the first world do very little hunting, and I've seen the size of your platters and can safely ...

most people consider cows dumber and uglier than deer, I've no idea if that's true the former's true, but generally people rate animals on cuteness and intelligence. I'm not a ...

just playing devils advocate here...but ultimately our society treats enjoyment above the health of animals all the time through sports which endanger animals (such as all equestrian events). Most hun

Yeah there is a bit of humour in this dynamic duo for sure. i think this argument i a difficult one becasue there are lots of different reasons people go ...

On a side note, nature doesn't actually have means of keeping our population in check, technology has circumvented a lot of this. I'd actually love to go hunting one day ...

Hmm, I'd agree that war is very different from hunting, but the obvious reason we don't hunt humans isn't part of the aforementioned criteria. AS a society we consider all ...

Righto, by 'review not edit' I'm assuming you don't want nit-picky details, but I may be completely wrong. Either way, I'll leave that for someone else. Some things you may ...

Ah no I hadn't intended it that way. My fault though, I was quite ambiguous *sigh*. I meant human-shape shifter. I guess the line about the cheater makes sense too ...

"I nodded uncontrollably" Makes sense, but perhaps "I nodded fervently" would fit better? "believing my father let me hold it" for some obscure reason I think you should put a ...

The runes encircling the serpent on Larrel’s shield flashed with scintillating colour as the flames rolled over him. Whilst the enchantment woven into the shield protected him, Larrel could only ...