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Family. It was a sore spot for Thomas but he let it slide, Cedrick wasn't to know. "We are comrades and we may yet become friends, you seem a decent ...

Elven druid partially inflicted with lycanthropy and enduring a constant inner battle? Bladesinger who develops an immunity to magic due to extensive necromantic torture? Torture can be used to build ...

“I first met the boy eight years ago.” It’s good to see this style of start, where you introduce the topic at hand before giving detail to put it into ...

8:36 The leather manacles fell away, vines withering in a winter chill. No sooner had that happened than James realised his mistake. A tiny circlet of wire had been threaded ...

It gladdened Thomas to know that the old king had thought highly of him. He also realised that Cara was likely to become his chief ward for the forceable future, ...

It seemed that no sooner had he arrived than he was expected to leave. The mercenaries continued to make plans with the princess as though they were partners in some ...

8:33 "James, wake up." "I don't want to it, hurts and I cant move." "James, wake up!" A voice in your head can't really shout at you, but it sure ...

Thomas stood behind the princesses as they exchanged smalltalk with the mercenary leader. He felt protective of the young royals, and he wasn't quite comfortable with how things stood. As ...

Thomas kept climbing the slope, ignoring the slight cramp he was getting in his shoulders. Through most of his travels he had worn only the basic breastplate of his armour, ...

I hope it isn’t too late to join? If i’m treading on anyones toes I’ll just leave Name: Thomas Age: young for an elf, old for his years Height: 6'1 ...

-Patient Notes- As progress with James had been building, his recent requests for basic comforts were agreed to, for the purpose of building trust between James and his various doctors. ...

manifestation- 1. self-taught intricate hand movements. when using power, the tatooes on James' wrists glow very slightly. 2, sense of justice. James can't manifest magic in a cause he considers ...

"Chase sprang awake." Okay, for the record I can almost forgive this because it isn't "awoke with a start". However that doesnt mean you can throw around words like sprang. ...

Alright mate, I clicked on yours because it had no reviews and it's much easier to review those. However it turns out you haven't reviewed anyone else's work yet and ...

1916 – Petrograd - “Hold him down” the voice was desperate, though it retained a touch of its commanding tone. A clawlike arm broke free of the melee and reached ...