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Re: LIfE
This isn't all of it and i realize its extremely choppy btw this is basically the first time anyones read it... ________________________________________________________________________________________
Mar 15, 2009 -
Re: Crystal Stars, Chapter 1 "The life of an urchin outcast
Hey! Btw I didn't think the mirror thing was an over used idea at all! And i smiled when you put Nova was biting her toenails. Your MC was full ...
Mar 15, 2009 -
Re: Supernatural Deliverance
Hey! Your writings really good! this isn't really an entry saying what you should do as much as i have questions. Is the man that was tied up Jesus like? ...
Mar 15, 2009 -
Re: No title...yet (prologue)
wow! their are so many great writers on this site and only a few stories that I've read really caught my attention and this is one of them! Great piece! ...
Mar 15, 2009 -
Re: Diaries of a Teenage Vampire: Chapter One
The two sentences, “Ya then I won’t have to hide from the police any more!” “Ya it’s been almost a year since you ran away from the orphanage and it’s ...
Mar 15, 2009 -
Re: A nice winter swim
Wonderful!! Wonderful!!! hey u should write 1 about chinese food haha no srrysously me super board idc where u r TEXT ME AND OMG I CANT WAIT TILL WESTMINISTER im ...
Mar 15, 2009 -
Re: It's Where All The Drama Is
It’s Where All The Drama Is Chapter 1 Have you ever imagined what your wedding would be like? Or knew the exact dress you would wear to your senior prom? ...
Mar 15, 2009 -
Re: The Pillar
This story has very good characters and a lot of potential to be great...just do some rewrites and put more detail in the surroundings and it will turn out fine.
Mar 15, 2009 -
Re: The Kingdom is Departed [1]
this is a really well written story and since I'm still new at this I won't criticize your work because I will most like come off as someone who doesn't ...
Mar 14, 2009 -
Re: The Throne
hey! thanks everyone for the reviews!!! They've helped alot! But um this was for a sixth grade historical fiction thingy, and i already turned it innn javascript:emoticon(':oops:') sooooo ya. THE ...
Mar 14, 2009
