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Heyy! Nice story! One thing that I'm curious about is what did Lady Komiko look like? And could you see any features of Pink that wasnt dirty or bloody? Well ...

aw this is really sad :( but good. if this really happened to you then that really sucks. I sympasize with you! okay just a couple of things...(I'm the least ...

good job! i know how it feels to have a weird dream and try writting it down... anyways! First of all i would try giving your characters less pedestrian names. ...

hey this is for school 6th grade very informal dont tell me the grammer please just tell me what you think of the story thank you and anyone who posts ...

haha i like this story!! At first i wasn't sure but the more i read the more i liked it!! I liked how you had the princes Cinderella be totally ...

Hey thanks a lot too everyones whose reviewed my stories!!! i really appreciate it!! :)

Heyy! to me this should probably go to science fiction but its up to you of course! I got a little lost at some parts. Especially when it jumped right ...

I think this is a fairly interesting story.. however i would put more thought into it. Not thought like it was poorly written but what did Imo think of Zoey ...

wow!! really intriguing! pm me with the next ch. i wasn't paying attention to spelling but that was good only 1 thing explain why Juno didn't feel in the mood ...

Chapter 2 Throughout the entire summer my main focus was talking with the teachers at the neighborhood school and getting to know the kids. As it turns out I was ...

it was good

it was good

heyy sorry for interupting the story but i sorta (not be wierded out i was a cheer leader so therfore not compleatly deranged) i sorta wrote this part in 4th ...

I haven't even read the story and i can tell i already like because its 100% sparkle free Okay now ive read the story and WOW!! Thats really good! Tho ...

I would slow down just a bit and be more descriptive of the shop what was the cut throat wearing that labels him? Was their a design on the gold ...