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Re: Do You Get It?
.....this hurts my head
Apr 6, 2009 -
Re: New Story Idea (so far)
the only thing is wheres the fun in being 13? Its a great age and all but you cant drive theres almost always adult supervision, and their not as mature. ...
Apr 6, 2009 -
Re: Short story (No title, hehe.)
well you said you wanted this ripped to shreds soo if you didn't mean it then stop reading here... ok well after the introduction and when ben comes into the ...
Apr 4, 2009 -
Re: Twilight && Harry Potter
80,000 gold stars for making fun of Twilight!!!! haha but one thing......i like jk rowling i mean her initials r JK in text language its just kidding. HAHA her names ...
Apr 4, 2009 -
Re: Two Friends, Two Lives, One Secret
The last sentence Watch your Jenna and Sophia should be home from her tutoring by 3.” is confusing. rewrite it so its proper grammar. Also there was some misspells and ...
Apr 4, 2009 -
Re: Travel Writing By Abigail Eastham
holla! make sure that you really stress that this is a fantasy story. Like allot. Because right now it seems like a non fiction story with typos. If this is ...
Apr 4, 2009 -
Re: Travel Writing By Abigail Eastham
holla! make sure that you really stress that this is a fantasy story. Like allot. Because right now it seems like a non fiction story with typos. If this is ...
Apr 4, 2009 -
Re: Untitled(for now)
woot woot chikita!! nice story wait whos Aubdry? Is that u maddie susie? i know siri's reese...oh well! write some more chapters!! i wanna read more!
Apr 4, 2009 -
Re: (New) Guardians Chapter 1
Good. It was a little slow and at the begging part of her dream their were some improper sentances. I think I would like the story more If I could ...
Mar 21, 2009 -
Re: The Masquerade- Chapter 1
I don't mean to be rude but it sounds just like a bad knckoff of Twilight and just like twilight it's not a memorable read and I couldent careless about ...
Mar 21, 2009 -
Re: The Little Girl in the Basement
hahaha omg i love Pink and Kiki!!! Ha!! I was cracking up when Pink beat Sophie up!!! I could totally picture that in my head! Very nice job! I liked ...
Mar 20, 2009 -
Re: The Movie for Twilight by Stephenie Meyer
omfg i friggen love you for doing this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOVE U!!! haha that was hilarious!!!!!!! and who cares if the crazy twilight lovers r offended this is funny!!!!
Mar 19, 2009 -
Re: It's Were All The Drama Is chapter 2
heeyyy u dont know whos duffle bag and such it is....you wont find dat out....and haha yes Mrs. Hanible is _______ ahaha and its supposed to be the mom midly ...
Mar 19, 2009 -
Re: LIfe chapter 3?
once again this is rough draft and this is once again the first time I've let anyone read it...sorry for all of the spelling and grammar mistakes i know i ...
Mar 19, 2009 -
Re: Historical Fiction
uuhh siri? The British were the ones who shot the phixes nose off...not the Nubians..... I CANT WAIT UNTIL WESTMINISTER WOODS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Mar 19, 2009