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See trinity!!! I told you this was a good poem!! That just goes to show that you should trust me when i recomend BOOKS (i told you so!!!) as well ...

A nice winter swim.The snow has just fallen, So fluffy, so nice. I go take a walk, I fall through the ice. Its cold and untelling, Not reavelling at all. ...

TRINITY!!!! how dare you use this just to get points!!!! grrrrrrrrr

haha!!! love it!!! its sooooo funny!! i can totally relate to Tory! I love love love her dry humor!! The only thing is that i would like to know what ...

hola chikita!! well...this ones tricky. I had to re-read it twice. Not because it was confusing but because i liked it. A Lot in fact but it had some rig ...

its good!! one question though.............. why is it in fantasy fiction? unless the story becomes more fantasy later on....then just never mind :D

I liked it. And sorry if you like it but I hardly ever nit-pick about grammar and commas because i can barley place them correctly myself. Anyways! I liked the ...

Karen was amazed when by the end of the summer I had found friends who didn’t touch me and didn’t ask questions. I felt kind of bad because I had ...

Chapter 2 Throughout the entire summer my main focus was talking with the teachers at the neighborhood school and getting to know the kids. As it turns out I was ...

I agree with Ofir, i lurve this!! I didn't really find anything that was that messed up. I agree with Ofir (again) when uh she? said that you really shouldn't ...

sigh i love YWS. Seriously their are so many talented writers who if their book was at Boarders or Barnes and Noble i would pick it up and be like, ...

i like the design! it makes it seem all the more mystical. Before i read the reviews i thought that that was part of the drawing! But ya its a ...

aww i like that story! The only thing was just be a little more descriptive. Also is that it or is their more? Maybe after the stories done put a ...

sorry people didnt like it.

Hola Chola! Nice chapter! I agree with everyone how you need to put more detail into the places you skimmed, ect. ect. you've already heard it. My review is this: ...