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It began to rain, hard. I don't know if that comma is really needed, unless you want to give it more impact, but I think the sentence following that does ...

Granted--you coursework from last year is all finished. I wish the portfolios would work again like yesterday!

Use this link instead. I really love it. It's gorgeous.

There's more, right? It doesn't seem like an ending, but then again it does. I agree with Alainna. The last sentence was great. I'll have to keep myself updated more ...

5/10 And whose that? Even if i did know, it's not so interesting.

TPBM loves their music.

Roya shakes her head and looks at Alice like she hasn't seen her for a year. "ALICE!" she screams and jumps on her. Alice pulls out any weapons on her, ...

Yeah... woah. I want to know if she died from loss of blood or if they found the feet. I know it's totaly disctusting, but I really want to know. ...

Lol, same. I saw the second picture and I gasped before I realized it was her pointer finger. Hehe... Anyway, I really think the first one is done well. Where ...

9/10 Ha, I wish that feature came with specific people I know...

It was short! I mean compared to everything else you've written--which isn't bad, it's just different. I liked the basic idea and structure of it, though I think it gets ...

Dija rewrite it? I'm just concidering reading it or not seeing as how there's nothing else to do. lol. Tell me if you post anything past where I left off.

Yes, I agree. It's soooo complete alone by itself. Chaos is breaking out behind me, so don't mind if I kinda get distracted. I really think it's great to contrast ...

Blegh. They're making us read historical fiction for summer reading. Those journal entires look so intensly involved! A Connecticut Yankee in King Arthur's Court by Mark Twain.