Royboy

It won't let me modify! The stupid screen keeps skipping. Well, thanks so much. I deleted that post informing you I was going for a nap, as it was pointless.... ...

She grinned at him, secretly wanting to kill him for booking them a caravan holiday in the first place Period. “You smell of…paprika,” He inhaled her hair deeply “And lavender… ...

If you look up Pat Buchanan on wikipedia you get some old political candidate. I think he's some comic strip super hero, though. Either that, or that's the impression someone ...

Hehehhahaha. I only wanted to see it because me and my friends have a joke about it. Then they got serious about wanting to see it and i was like ...

Fun fun! I want to read more. I want to read sooo much more! hehe. His uncle is pretty moody, I must admit. Was it meant that way, or did ...

JEEZE. The first one scares the living daylight out of me. She looks like she came straight out of a scary movie! Haha, I can hardly sleep with my not-nearly-as-life-like ...

The wars that once ravaged the underworld are now a thing of the past although there are still some small skirmishes every now and then but there has not been ...

I like the third wizard one. The graphic art was pretty awesome. If you ever get that into a program, I'd love to see it. I'm sure it'd come out ...

Haha, yeah. That makes so much more sense. It just seemed like it fit the criteria for your own contest in a general kind of way. Which contest would you ...

Are you entering your own contest? I didn't find any grammatical errors, so your're off the hook with the comma nazi. XD What I didn't understand was why he couldn't ...

Is a single sentence of forshadowing enough, or do I have to rewrite this? If it's only one chapter that's like this, will it really make that big of a ...

Yeah, I appologize. Hehe. It gets not-so-perfect in a bit, but I just wanted to show how it was an ideal life with a loving family and everything. Will you ...

I said Paperback, only because paperback is what's usually available and more convinient in more ways than one. I would have chosen centuries of old scrap paper if it weren't ...