Royboy

Heck yes I listen to music while I'm writing. I'm always listening to music. However, unlike you, I don't really listen to a certain type of music to inspire me ...

Uh.... wow. Your welcome? Granted. You have all the time in the world, but unfortunately, you don't know how to unstop time, so you die alone reading a boring book ...

M.... interesting. Like Tamora said, fix how it looks like Elyn talking. I like how your new character is so secretive as well. I'll check back in some other time ...

Granted. Say, where did your computer go, anyhow? I wish I had that flyleaf album now.

interesting. Me gusta! I'd totaly go and read if you post it!

Yes, but do not underestimate them , they’ll fight back. So I just jump and grab the weakest , right mom? I pounced on the deer, attacking it, taking it ...

Use quotes or italics. It's a bit confusing without them. Make sure you put commas in the right places and the punctuation is correct like here: Look what I found ...

Granted, but she hates you for making this wish since she never wanted to have kids. She was actually going to break up with you a day later. I wish ...

I remember when my brother used to play that game. He would let me watch if I didn't talk. I think this would be interesting. I was about to leave ...

Granted. It's broken and one of the pieces is still missing. I wish people would take me more seriously sometimes.

Try the Chronicals of Pern by Anne McCaffery (I think it's McCaffery....)

Granted. You're drowning in it. I wish my teacher weren't so awefully horrible and could actually teach us something.

Granted, but the results say that you really aren't sane at all. You end up more insane than my mom! (just trust me, that's saying something.) I wish I wasn't ...

Uh.... You accidentally use the power on yourself and since white magic is unusable unless you are alive, you cannot bring yourself back from the dead. Okay... wow. That was ...