Royboy

Shells

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Oh, jeezie, you guys. WHY would I do that? Anyway, thanks for the imput. I've gone back to fix it up. I'm only on because I have an extra few ...

Thanks for the imput. I've only got a little time after my computer class to be writing this, so I went and I fixed it up. Next chapter should be ...

*Gasp!* I'm going to find JC house and kill Richard. It's all his fault! I like Amber bringing Jamie to reality and telling her how it is and what will ...

I'm afraid to wear beads now... There was nothing to hand on to for balance. I think you mean hang. I looked about frantically, but I couldn’t see at thing. ...

I loved this. My only little titch was that maybe Mary could just walk out without saying I hate you. It seems more dramatic to me and that's what you're ...

*scream* ... okay that was in a good way kind of scream. Hehe. I don't like surprises!!!! I think you did really good this time. I'm a little upset at ...

I think it's a little useful if you have a piece that nobody is critiquing. I mean, if you really can't find something wrong with it, but you want to ...