Royboy

Granted. You don't have to, but you have an inhuman impluse to instead.

This is.... the fifth time i've tried to start criting your story.... I swear to god this is the last try. after this, if i can't press submit, then i'm ...

Haha. yeah what night mistress said. Suicidal implications. That's about half of all their songs.... bust still. they're an awesome band and Amy Lee is a new kind of awesome. ...

Roya is confused, but she watches Alice's arrow fly and land next to Bella. "That JUST missed me. Be more careful, will you?" She runs over to Bella to see ...

Hey, Stu, whats up? I just got bored, so I thought to myself "Why don't I go crit stuff?" and yeah... “Ask the leaders you serve that tax us too ...

*SOBS* I JUST TYPED UP LIKE SOOOOOOO MUCH AND IT LOGGED ME OUTTT! *sobs* I'm getting so frustrated with this site because it logs me off at random times and ...

Overall, it's a good storyline and the characters are coming into place. I'm just wondering if there'll be any more elves... Anyway--I just found some gramatical errors here and there, ...

Granted. YWS gets shut down and now there's nothing to DO on the internet. I wish I had internet on my own computer and didn't have to get on this ...

Royboy is dragged into another dimension and her mother is calling her for dinner. "MOM! Now now!" Royboy won't be adding to the adventure for a long time because she ...

First off, I don't cook. Second off, why would I be writing in the kitchen? 9. Clean your room and talk on the phone.

Ahhh! Those places where there could be a better word are so hard to fix! I sat at my desk staring at the computer screen and listening to music for ...

And yet again... shortest chapter? "Home is further than you think;" "Please, Creiha, it’s just a little further ." Farther Creiha--She just seems reluctant to go back to her own ...

After everyone else's comments, mine seem a bit bare. First off, I just want to say that this is awesome from what I've just read. I think you're over reacting ...