Royboy

AHHH! I KNOW! I did too! I have it all in a nifty little box. I'm waiting for Lady Friday to get to the damn library already. I'm number 28 ...

*sobs at her country's stupidity* WHY must we be dying? It'll be very soon when the US implodes. Please tell me I'm the only one worried that dollars are worth ...

“so what is the first thing your going to do when we get back?” So “I dunno, I’m craving for some of Theirina’s cooking though, I’m thinking I ask her ...

Leanne

If you want any crits, you have to use paragraphs. start a new paragraph every time someone different speaks or the subject changes. Then pm me and tell me to ...

My favorite quote of all time is one of my brother's quotes. "When it rains you get wet." One, cause it's so simple, two cause it's my brother's quote, and ...

Fit it, you shall? Shakespeare or Yoda... haha i'm just messing. I really liked this chapter. The Attack brought up the point in the back of my mind the entire ...

Thank you, but I can't take other people's work. I have a thing with that. =/ I was looking for other people's suggestions and thoughts as to how they would ...

ohohoh me gusta! but I can't use it, as it's your own lines.

I have control issues. Let's just put it at that. I wouldn't want to hurt anyone's feelings by telling them NO! I don't like the way you write this! or ...

She jumped into her bed at night with fears For creatures scratched and clawed their way to her the monsters kept her up and caused her tears they scared her ...

hehe 8/10. I like it. Funny and inspiring. It kinda makes me want to go find some oil, a wad of paper and a match...

Welcome to YWS! although, I'm not sure if I can say that since i'm not a greeter. eh, whatever. what kinds of poems do you write?

Oops! I totaly forgot that it didn't carry over from the computer document! My bad. it was italicized on my comp, i swear! *hurries to go fix the little glitch*

AHHH! Read over your work! Please! I really love the story and all, but just a few nitpicks here and there and you'll throw the entire audience off. If you ...