Royboy

Roya jumps and just misses some magic aimed at her. "I'm a squirell for a reason.... I just can't remember," she insists. "Woah, guess what you guys? I have fangs!" ...

Hey yeah, everything they've said. Also, you can press edit at the top of your original post to fix it up without having to post an entire new comment with ...

One thing: when you use quotes, make sure you have the right punctuation. If the words after the quotes are describing how the sentence was said or the character that ...

Her once smooth cheeks were blotchy and her hair was a muss. Mess. question.Then she gave him a small smile, “no,” the woman said softly. ...question. Then she gave him ...

"That's what you get. Back off! Size may be daunting, but--okay let's not finish that quote." Roya wonders if anyone in here has seen Happy Feet. "So are we going ...

Granted, but now you can't get anything but A's or your parents will ground you and everyone will be disappointed in you. *Trust me, it's not fun* I wish my ...

Eh.... to be nice i'd give you a 5/10. It wasn't all that great when you added the last line. Or the second to last line. It's not really all ...

Granted. It gets bad reviews and you give up before it goes anywhere. I wish this thread kept going.

Am I the first to say that I like the color better? I think that she would do better with a different background, like write me said. She doesn't stand ...

The rubix cube is great.

My favorites are the first and the last, strangely enough. I take it the moon was for a website? It's really awesome. I really like the footsteps because they're just ...

Roya is a squirell. "I take it nobody cares...." she mumbles as she leaps along through the trees after the group. She sees a light coming from under some brush ...

It was left behind from the earthquake, I assume?

Roya is a little confused as to what's going on. She's taken the shape of a flying squirel and is watching from the trees, either way. "God I hate when ...

I began to dig through the piles of junk, dust, and dirt. And there at the bottom was the typewriter. Make it one sentence. I liked the way this started. ...