RoxanneR

I have written a new prologue to my story, but it's 3 A4 pages long! Is this too long for a prologue? And what length chapters do you usually write. ...

I use my phone book to make one of my desk's legs higher. But it is not serving a better use, sitting on my desk rather that under it. RR*

I think of it being an interesting way to find the true meaning of my story. It may be craziness, but hey, if craziness is going to get your book ...

Why do you need to outlay a colour? And, not green, it's my favourite colour too, Myth! It just shows how stupid us humans are. Why did you write this ...

Some of the stuff it a little unclear, but I need more to go on to decide if I want the read the rest! But I agree with Snoink. Why ...

It's interesting, I'll give you that. Some of the grammer is a bit strange, but what I found amazing is how many alian-sounding names you thought up! I can't even ...

Is this an entire story or just a chapter? RR*

There's no easy way to put this, most of the grammar is quite wrong. There is no introduction to the piece, and no way of us knowing what's happening. Most ...

This should be in poetry, not fiction. Unless, of course, you want to turn it into a story. Then it's fine. RR*

There are no spacings! Each new speaker's dialogue should be on a new paragraph, and with an indent. You have none of these things in there at the moment, but ...

Yeh, a peom doesn't have to rhyme, and by making it do that you are ruining the whole meaning of the poem. Relax a little and just the the poetry ...

I go to a drama school and they once asked me to write a play for them. I acted it out with my friends and then I started doing it ...

Thanks for all that help! I have jiggle it around a bit and it sounds much better now! I owe you one! RR*

I have just written a new prologue to my novel, yet I feel there is one sentence that spoils it, but I don't know why. Can anybody help me? "The ...

Yep, it's a pretty mad idea, but it seems to work for me. But, then again, many people say that I am mad, and I don't think Mr. Bubbles want's ...