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Roxy, Hurry up and write the story! I don't get how you can leave me for so long with that Sara girl. She's getting flirty and scary... Don't leave me ...

HUGEACIOUS Sort of, another word that means huge. I enjoy making up words. It's something I do as part of everyday life. FUNKADELICNESS Funky, delicious, anything else you can think ...

Granted. But you're hired as a present wrapper in a toy shop, and all you do, all day is sit and wrap presents. Your fingers get so tired that they ...

Yep, I go to an all girl's school and I feel the same way. Everyone thinks were lesbians, but I have a boyfriend! I wish people wouldn't think that way. ...

This is interesting, but funny! I thought the ending was a bit weak, but apart from that it was good. The sentences were at the right balance and it all ...

This is very confusing, but you seem mad... O____o But it was interesting...ish RR*

I'm running a drama club at my school and I'm really in need of a playscript that kids aged 4-13 could perform. Anyone got any ideas? RR*

It's a pretty good piece of work, and it should stay in this forum. It's pretty dramatic! But I agree with bubblewrapped and the others, a few corrections are needed. ...

Granted. But she's evil and she attacks you and the rest of your family. I wish I had blonde hair...

This piece was interesting, if a little unerving! That is exacaly like my printer at home, and it's starting to worry be a little, what with the voices and the ...

Granted...but now they're so nice it ruins the complete plot of the story, everyone hates you and they never speak to you again. I wish I had a boyfriend...

It's a good story, and Ralph seems just like an annoying little brother. Did you base him on your own sibling? Darry is an interesting character, the way he retaliates ...

I feel sure I have seen this somewhere before, but if I haven't, please excuse me. It was funny, but the text size was a bit small and the huge ...

What else are you supposed to change playdough to?! I like it. It sums up most of life, just the way it is. Keep writing! RR*

Yeh, I agree with Miss POKE. There are a few bits that need to be touched up, but it looked good. But as for your grammer, there wasn't much of ...